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peyrin

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Oct 27, 2017
4,408
California
Can recommend Hinamatsuri, has some genuinely heartstring-tugging moments amidst the comedy.

Started Hinamatsuri for now. Hasn't been as consistently funny as Mitsuboshi Colors or Hisomaso but I do like the way they're tackling the class divide in modern Japan with an ensemble cast. This thing also has a lot more animation firepower than I anticipated which is always a plus.
 

Twig

Member
Oct 25, 2017
7,486
It's not adorable, it's the face of CHAOS
but chaos is adorable.

look how cute this is
gwEcw6j.png


:P
lmao

I look forward to seeing the chaos as it develops.
 

sibarraz

Prophet of Regret - One Winged Slayer
Avenger
Oct 27, 2017
18,094
Is Saintia Sho good? I always wanted an excuse to like Saint Seiya, but besides the 12 houses arc and maybe Poseidon, I was never able to get that much into it, but I always liked the toys released of the series, and I really like the design of Shoko
 

blurr

Member
Oct 26, 2017
793
Hi-Score Girl 10

Hidaka is a..... SMART girl but it's stil really hard to say if her plan will work out. This triangle reminds me of SNAFU S2's with the lead characters Hikigaya(Yaguchi), Yukinoshita(Ono) and Yuigahama(Hidaka). Hidaka isn't making Yuigahama's mistake here, she intends to play the long game. I like what's happened to Yaguchi post-exam. It makes a lot of sense and paves way for a lot of possibilities.
 
Oct 25, 2017
2,333
Hi-Score Girl 09

GOD DAMN IT.

This was difficult to watch in more ways than one.

I appreciated how the ending didn't feel the need to explicitly spell out what had happened, but just highlighted Oono's test number, extra-highlighted Yaguchi's test number (including the reference to Capcom's 1942), and slowly panned over the list of numbers of accepted students, leaving us to draw the obvious conclusion. It's straightforward storytelling, but it still has a level of faith that the audience can put two and two together that TV can easily not have. And of course, the ED song playing over the whole thing gave the sequence added impact.
 
The Promised Neverland Analysis

Jexhius

Community Resetter
Member
Oct 25, 2017
965
[Promised Neverland: Anime vs Manga]
Should I just read the comics for The Neverland? It seems most people are saying it is better to read it.

What do you guys think?
The notion that the manga for Promised Neverland is inherently superior to the the anime is a talking point that I've seen argued for most strongly since the 3rd episode aired. My initial reaction was to dismiss it outright because manga fans nearly always say that the original source material is superior to the anime adaptation. I've heard the same arguments raised when discussing hundreds of different anime, argument such as: the character designs are poor, the art doesn't match the manga, the adaptation make changes to the story/visuals/plotting/characters etc. Sometimes there's some validity to these complaints but they often strike me as knee-jerk reactions to anything being changed in an adaptation. I believe that when you translate a story from one medium to another you should be making changes to the reflect the differences between manga and anime.

As a result of this perspective, I wasn't really paying too much attention when the same arguments were trotted out for Promised Neverland. More of the same rubbish, I nonchalantly assumed. That is, until someone said that the inner monologue from the manga was turned into exterior dialogue in the anime. This struck me as such a bizarre change that I needed to investigate further. After a bit of digging, it soon turned out that this move was the least of the problems with this adaptation. There's issues with characterization, with world building, with the mind games, with the tone and with the very logic of the writing. Some of these changes feel like compromises that result from attempting to compress the manga down in order to get through the story faster, which is something that I can at least understand. However, some feel truly bizarre and wrongheaded. Let's take a closer look at some specific changes.

Part I: Cut Scenes

The anime has a problem communicating information to the audience in a way that makes logical sense. This problem arises because the anime chose to cut certain scenes from the manga and the result is that some scenes makes no sense, important information isn't relayed to the audience or and certain characters appear less intelligent than they are in the manga.

Logical Consistency Part A: Time frame
There's a scene in episode 3 where the protaganists are discussing the tracking devices they believe to be implanted in their body. They're trying to work out how the tracking devices work so that they can overcome then as part of their escape. Ray makes this completely offhanded comment about the tracking technology which should baffle anime viewers:

yearep3paj4j.jpg


Why is Ray talking about 2015 technology? I assumed this is was a mistranslation, because the show has clearly established that the present in year 2045, as seen in this shot of a calendar from episode 1:

calendarep11mjqt.jpg


This isn't an insignificant detail, it's a key piece of information. In order to get to the bottom of this, we have to look at the manga to an earlier scene. This is when Ray confronts Norman and Ellie and learns the truth about the farm. In the anime, Ray is clearly shown holding a book, but it's significance is not clear, because Ray never discusses or opens the book.

In the manga:

book1w3jlq.png

book25tkrq.png


This seems like fairly significant information to me, information that the the audience and the characters should know. It suggests that something has happened to humanity during the last 30 years, which allows us to start building a timeline to better understand the world. Cutting this brief scene may have saved a minute of runtime, but it means that the scene in episode 3 no longer makes sense, as it's referencing something anime viewers do not know.

Why is this a problem?
First and foremost, the writing should make logical sense. When it doesn't I'm left wondering if I've just missed some important information or if there has been some mistake. It basically pulls me out of the experience of watching the series.

Secondly, The Promised Neverland is a thriller but it has 'mystery' elements to it. There are big questions about "what's really going on" (what happened to humanity, are the kids on Earth, who set up the farms etc). Both the audience and the characters should be on the same page in terms of the knowledge they have about the world because they both start knowing nothing. Paying attention to the clues and uncovering the mystery along with these characters should be part of the pleasure of watching the series. By removing information about the world, the anime viewers have reduced some of the fun of watching the show and made it harder to work out what's "really gong on", especially as all the characters in the series seem to understand the significance of 2015.

Logical Consistency Part B: Ray's Knowledge
In the same scene in episode 3 as above, Ray makes this comment how he believes the tracking technology might work:

techzmkgf.jpg


How has Ray come to this conclusion, when as far as we aware he knows nothing about technology. It seems like a huge logical leap based off of nothing.

In the manga, as we've seen above its established he has read this book on technology:

book1yvk57.png


And that he's actually been studying it:

tech5pjj5.png


Now everything makes more a lot more sense.

Interestingly enough, the title of Ray's book* is seen briefly in episode 2:

booktitle9vkw8.jpg


Those of you who watched episode 2 might not remember this particular shot and for good reason. The title of the book is fully visible for only half a second. This isn't an exaggeration, its onscreen for 0.4/0.5 of a second and as a result there's a decent chance that you missed it. Considering that Ray's comment in episode 3 only makes sense if the audience has seen the title of the book in episode 2, you'd think that it would be a good idea to hold on the above shot for at least a couple of seconds. Instead it's practically a cryptic clue that you can only locate by frame-skipping through the episode.

Why is this a problem?
As above, the series should make logical sense. If a character knows something information and is referencing it, then it helps if the anime viewer is also aware of it (especially when it's something so specific that children generally wouldn't know). In this case, my complain may strike you as a nitpick (especially as the book's title is briefly shown) but it's worth noting that this whole issue only occurred because they decided to cut a scene from the manga which contained world-building.

Kid Geniuses: The Map
A crucial factor in buying the premise of the show is that the protagonists are geniuses. They have to be, because otherwise there's noway that a few kids can go up against scary adults and a world of alien monsters. The protagonists must repeatedly demonstrate their abilities and skills in order for the premise to hold water. It's not enough to just be told that they're clever, we need evidence. Unfortunately, the anime removes certain scenes from the manga which demonstrates the cleverness of kids.

Lets go back to apparently my favourite scene in the anime, where the kids are chatting in the library. Please pay attention to the background (and not the weird triple-chair blocking that makes this shot a mess):

mapep32ikj81.jpg


It's a world map from 2010! What a rich source of knowledge. You can see that apparently the world of Promised Neverland is indeed our own Earth (and not some alternative world Earth with other continents). You'd think that someone would pay attention to this map and comment on it. Well, in the manga:

map1i6kf5.png

map2ssjbr.png


In the manga, this short scene demonstrates the following about the kids: they're observant, they're knowledgeable, they're always looking for a way to gain an advantage. In the anime, they just ignore the map which if you're a charitable means they have already discussed it (off-screen) or if you're less generous it suggests that the kids aren't as bright as they should be.

Mind Games and Mom

Mom is set up as the key antagonist who the children must somehow defeat (either physically, mentally or both) if they are to escape the farm. We're supposed to gather that she's ruthless, intelligent, determined, observant and cold-blooded. We see her testing the children (through her tracking device and also direct questioning) to discover who has uncovered the big secret of the farm. Our protagonists have outmaneuvered her by feigning innocence and keeping their heads down but as time goes in we get the impression that they'll have to take more direct steps to best her.

This core conflict is largely a mental one, because neither side can directly attack the other (the kids are too weak, Mom doesn't know who has learnt the secret). When characters engage in this kind of mental battle of wits, each side has to try and understand the other so that they can guess what they're thinking. From these assumptions, characters to try make a mental image of their adnversary and they use those predictions to try and outmanouver them somehow. Eventually we learn if those guesses were correct and then the person who best predicted the moves of their revival tends to come out on top. The fun is in seeing characters trryign to best each other through trickery, creativity, intelligence and knowledge.

Unfortunately the anime naturally has far less of these moments than the manga because it removes most of the internal monologue which serves as the home for much of this content. I feel that Mom is hit hardest by this because she literally has no-one to talk with explain her thoughts to. It also has less of these moments because they cut this scene from the manga:

mom6k3kg4.png

mom703j3u.png

mom8iyk57.png


It's a shame that this scene is missing from the anime because it conveys lots of important ideas in a succinct fashion. It shows that our heroes are building a mental image of Mom to try and understand and outmaneuver her. It also demonstrates that the kids are smart because they've picked up that Mon's approach is strange. We, as the audience, understand that Mom is trying to keep her mistake under-wraps rather than tackle them directly but it's good to see that the kids have the intelligence to potentially pick up on this. It helps to sell the idea that the kids could stand a chance in their battle to escape the farm.

Part II: Changed Scenes

While some scenes have been cut, other scenes have been changed. Change inevitable in any adaptation but I feel that some of these changes are really distracting and make the show worse than it should be.

Sister Krone
Sister Krone isn't someone who has been changed between manga and anime, it's more like her character has been assassinated. Here's the changes:
- She doesn't sing in the manga, and she certainly doesn't sing loudly
- She doesn't talk to or coddle a toy baby, that scene is pulled out of thin air for the anime.
- She doesn't discuss her plan out lout loud like an idiot
- As a result of the above, she doesn't come across as a jolly, deranged figure of fun. She's calculating, observant and ruthless with schemes of her own - just in a different way to Mon.

I really don't understand how this:

plotjpkv6.png

sisterkronemangasrjmd.png


Was changed to this:

sisterkrome15njhl.jpg

sistersister5ak31.jpg


The anime version of Sister Krone is peculiar, manic character that really doesn't mesh with the tone that the series had established up to that point. She doesn't feel nearly as serious or threatening as the cold and calculating character in the manga.

Internal Dialogue

The manga for Promised Neverland frequently makes uses of internal dialogue. I understand why the anime has removed it: what works in one medium doesn't work in another. Internal dialogue is common in books and comics, not in films and TV. This does, however create two problems. Firstly, we miss information that helps to develop our characters, especially those who don't have anyone to speak to (Krone, Mom.) Secondly, when the show realizes certain information is vital to the plot, the way those ideas are communicated leaves a lot to be desired.

Part A: Characterization
There's too many examples of the first kind to list them all, but as an example consider the below scene:

momavejvh.png


I love how Mom wasn't just observing Emma visually, but also subtly checking her pulse. This suggests that she's calculating and observant on a whole other level and really elevates how dangerous she is.

I'm not saying that every scene from the manga should be in the anime. Nor am I saying that you should constantly hear the thoughts of characters while watching an anime. I just want to highlight that something is lost when translating one medium to another. Now, in a well made adaptation you'll see tricks used to convert the internal dialogue into something more palpable for the medium of anime. For example, you might convert the essence of the dialogue into an actual conversation between two characters, so that the audience can learn the same thing.

The above scene with Mom is somewhat trickier, but there are still ways to convey the idea using tools only found in anime. For example, when Mom is touching Emma's neck, we could have a quick cut to a close-up of Mom's fingers and we could hear Emma's heartbeat, hopefully communicating to the audience that Mom was checking for an elevated pulse. Or we could use more abstract and unusual camera angles, colours, sound effects, musical choices to communicate similar ideas. There's a real plethora of options, but I don't feel like the anime is using any of them. It feels like it's using the visuals of the manga as a base and not doing a whole lot with them.

Part B: Questionable Choices
Sometimes these manga scenes/lines are converted into the anime because its vital that the audience understands the information that was previously internal dialogue. Unfortunately whenever these lines were converted for episode 3 they chose to have the characters speak (or sing out loud) information that would get the characters killed if anyone else heard them. It just doesn't make any sense or fit the tone or logic of the series:

sisterkromeqjjqj.jpg


She's right next to the kid's rooms, they can definitely hear this!

loudtalk2ffkop.jpg

loudtalk4uoj53.jpg


Watch out Emma, glasses girl is literally right next to you! What are you saying? Not only are these scenes ridiculous on their face, but they're completely avoidable. Why can't characters whisper, or heck, just have them think these thoughts to themselves. It would be far less silly and certainly less distracting.

Part III: Conclusions and Staying Positive

Different mediums have different strengths and weaknesses. It's inevitable and important that a work will change when it's adapted from one medium to another. A skilled production team will draw upon the key elements of the source material: story, tone, characters, theme etc - and find a creative way to translate these to anime. It's even possible for elements to change radically from one to the other - and that's fine too, as long as the resulting work is still good.

In the case of Promised Neverland, many of the changes that I've examined only diminish the quality of the series. Some are just plain bad (the timeline, characters speaking their secrets thoughts out loud), others are creative choices that don't mesh with the tone of the story (Sister Krone) while others failure to communicate key ideas about the characters. None of it works. With the creative staff making decisions this bad so early on, I'm pretty concerned about where the rest of the season is going.

I don't want to leave on a purely negative note, so I've decided to throw out some recommendations for other works which share some similarities to the ideas/tone/genre of Promised Neverland, but which I consider to be much better:

Thrillers:
Monster - This 74 (!) episode long mystery/thriller is an all time classic and one of my favourite shows of all time. The production quality is excellent for a work of this length and the series maintains a haunting, tense tone throughout.
Death Note - This work is certainly 'edgier' and more over the top than Promised Neverland but it's still an extremely entertaining series. It's focus is squarely on the mind games between the two main characters with far less of a focus on mystery.
Kaiji - This is another work which focuses on mind games but its setting and tone is far more grounded than either Promised Neverland or Death Note.
Hannibal (TV Series) - Definitely not an anime, but I'd be in dereliction of duty if I didn't recommend people watched one of the most impressive, engaging and mesmerizing thrillers in any medium.

Prison Break Stories:
Prison Break - Even though this show went downhill far before they stopped making it, I still consider the first two seasons to be exciting, creative and relentlessly tense. You just have to pretend that series stopped at the end of the second season.
 

SigmasonicX

Member
Oct 25, 2017
15,474
As one of the manga readers who pointed out the internal monologues thing, I feel like I might have ruined people's enjoyment of the show, haha. Anime only viewers on other sites seem to like it just fine.
 

Hypron

Member
Oct 27, 2017
4,059
NZ
I mean it's not a perfect adaptation and there are some dumb changes like pointed out, but I'm still having a good time even after having read the manga. Watching Radiant might have lowered my standards as far as adaptation quality goes though lol
 

Steroyd

Member
Oct 27, 2017
691
As one of the manga readers who pointed out the internal monologues thing, I feel like I might have ruined people's enjoyment of the show, haha. Anime only viewers on other sites seem to like it just fine.

Nah it's one of those things that's hard not to notice, half the time I'm expecting mother and her assistant to jump out at them while they're in the middle of the conversation, or one of them is secretly listening as they're talking to each other turns out they' re not supposed to hear anything even though they should.

It's still tense mind games albeit less effective than if the adaptation was more faithful.
 

Richter1887

Banned
Oct 27, 2017
39,146
[Promised Neverland: Anime vs Manga]

The notion that the manga for Promised Neverland is inherently superior to the the anime is a talking point that I've seen argued for most strongly since the 3rd episode aired. My initial reaction was to dismiss it outright because manga fans nearly always say that the original source material is superior to the anime adaptation. I've heard the same arguments raised when discussing hundreds of different anime, argument such as: the character designs are poor, the art doesn't match the manga, the adaptation make changes to the story/visuals/plotting/characters etc. Sometimes there's some validity to these complaints but they often strike me as knee-jerk reactions to anything being changed in an adaptation. I believe that when you translate a story from one medium to another you should be making changes to the reflect the differences between manga and anime.

As a result of this perspective, I wasn't really paying too much attention when the same arguments were trotted out for Promised Neverland. More of the same rubbish, I nonchalantly assumed. That is, until someone said that the inner monologue from the manga was turned into exterior dialogue in the anime. This struck me as such a bizarre change that I needed to investigate further. After a bit of digging, it soon turned out that this move was the least of the problems with this adaptation. There's issues with characterization, with world building, with the mind games, with the tone and with the very logic of the writing. Some of these changes feel like compromises that result from attempting to compress the manga down in order to get through the story faster, which is something that I can at least understand. However, some feel truly bizarre and wrongheaded. Let's take a closer look at some specific changes.

Part I: Cut Scenes

The anime has a problem communicating information to the audience in a way that makes logical sense. This problem arises because the anime chose to cut certain scenes from the manga and the result is that some scenes makes no sense, important information isn't relayed to the audience or and certain characters appear less intelligent than they are in the manga.

Logical Consistency Part A: Time frame
There's a scene in episode 3 where the protaganists are discussing the tracking devices they believe to be implanted in their body. They're trying to work out how the tracking devices work so that they can overcome then as part of their escape. Ray makes this completely offhanded comment about the tracking technology which should baffle anime viewers:

yearep3paj4j.jpg


Why is Ray talking about 2015 technology? I assumed this is was a mistranslation, because the show has clearly established that the present in year 2045, as seen in this shot of a calendar from episode 1:

calendarep11mjqt.jpg


This isn't an insignificant detail, it's a key piece of information. In order to get to the bottom of this, we have to look at the manga to an earlier scene. This is when Ray confronts Norman and Ellie and learns the truth about the farm. In the anime, Ray is clearly shown holding a book, but it's significance is not clear, because Ray never discusses or opens the book.

In the manga:

book1w3jlq.png

book25tkrq.png


This seems like fairly significant information to me, information that the the audience and the characters should know. It suggests that something has happened to humanity during the last 30 years, which allows us to start building a timeline to better understand the world. Cutting this brief scene may have saved a minute of runtime, but it means that the scene in episode 3 no longer makes sense, as it's referencing something anime viewers do not know.

Why is this a problem?
First and foremost, the writing should make logical sense. When it doesn't I'm left wondering if I've just missed some important information or if there has been some mistake. It basically pulls me out of the experience of watching the series.

Secondly, The Promised Neverland is a thriller but it has 'mystery' elements to it. There are big questions about "what's really going on" (what happened to humanity, are the kids on Earth, who set up the farms etc). Both the audience and the characters should be on the same page in terms of the knowledge they have about the world because they both start knowing nothing. Paying attention to the clues and uncovering the mystery along with these characters should be part of the pleasure of watching the series. By removing information about the world, the anime viewers have reduced some of the fun of watching the show and made it harder to work out what's "really gong on", especially as all the characters in the series seem to understand the significance of 2015.

Logical Consistency Part B: Ray's Knowledge
In the same scene in episode 3 as above, Ray makes this comment how he believes the tracking technology might work:

techzmkgf.jpg


How has Ray come to this conclusion, when as far as we aware he knows nothing about technology. It seems like a huge logical leap based off of nothing.

In the manga, as we've seen above its established he has read this book on technology:

book1yvk57.png


And that he's actually been studying it:

tech5pjj5.png


Now everything makes more a lot more sense.

Interestingly enough, the title of Ray's book* is seen briefly in episode 2:

booktitle9vkw8.jpg


Those of you who watched episode 2 might not remember this particular shot and for good reason. The title of the book is fully visible for only half a second. This isn't an exaggeration, its onscreen for 0.4/0.5 of a second and as a result there's a decent chance that you missed it. Considering that Ray's comment in episode 3 only makes sense if the audience has seen the title of the book in episode 2, you'd think that it would be a good idea to hold on the above shot for at least a couple of seconds. Instead it's practically a cryptic clue that you can only locate by frame-skipping through the episode.

Why is this a problem?
As above, the series should make logical sense. If a character knows something information and is referencing it, then it helps if the anime viewer is also aware of it (especially when it's something so specific that children generally wouldn't know). In this case, my complain may strike you as a nitpick (especially as the book's title is briefly shown) but it's worth noting that this whole issue only occurred because they decided to cut a scene from the manga which contained world-building.

Kid Geniuses: The Map
A crucial factor in buying the premise of the show is that the protagonists are geniuses. They have to be, because otherwise there's noway that a few kids can go up against scary adults and a world of alien monsters. The protagonists must repeatedly demonstrate their abilities and skills in order for the premise to hold water. It's not enough to just be told that they're clever, we need evidence. Unfortunately, the anime removes certain scenes from the manga which demonstrates the cleverness of kids.

Lets go back to apparently my favourite scene in the anime, where the kids are chatting in the library. Please pay attention to the background (and not the weird triple-chair blocking that makes this shot a mess):

mapep32ikj81.jpg


It's a world map from 2010! What a rich source of knowledge. You can see that apparently the world of Promised Neverland is indeed our own Earth (and not some alternative world Earth with other continents). You'd think that someone would pay attention to this map and comment on it. Well, in the manga:

map1i6kf5.png

map2ssjbr.png


In the manga, this short scene demonstrates the following about the kids: they're observant, they're knowledgeable, they're always looking for a way to gain an advantage. In the anime, they just ignore the map which if you're a charitable means they have already discussed it (off-screen) or if you're less generous it suggests that the kids aren't as bright as they should be.

Mind Games and Mom

Mom is set up as the key antagonist who the children must somehow defeat (either physically, mentally or both) if they are to escape the farm. We're supposed to gather that she's ruthless, intelligent, determined, observant and cold-blooded. We see her testing the children (through her tracking device and also direct questioning) to discover who has uncovered the big secret of the farm. Our protagonists have outmaneuvered her by feigning innocence and keeping their heads down but as time goes in we get the impression that they'll have to take more direct steps to best her.

This core conflict is largely a mental one, because neither side can directly attack the other (the kids are too weak, Mom doesn't know who has learnt the secret). When characters engage in this kind of mental battle of wits, each side has to try and understand the other so that they can guess what they're thinking. From these assumptions, characters to try make a mental image of their adnversary and they use those predictions to try and outmanouver them somehow. Eventually we learn if those guesses were correct and then the person who best predicted the moves of their revival tends to come out on top. The fun is in seeing characters trryign to best each other through trickery, creativity, intelligence and knowledge.

Unfortunately the anime naturally has far less of these moments than the manga because it removes most of the internal monologue which serves as the home for much of this content. I feel that Mom is hit hardest by this because she literally has no-one to talk with explain her thoughts to. It also has less of these moments because they cut this scene from the manga:

mom6k3kg4.png

mom703j3u.png

mom8iyk57.png


It's a shame that this scene is missing from the anime because it conveys lots of important ideas in a succinct fashion. It shows that our heroes are building a mental image of Mom to try and understand and outmaneuver her. It also demonstrates that the kids are smart because they've picked up that Mon's approach is strange. We, as the audience, understand that Mom is trying to keep her mistake under-wraps rather than tackle them directly but it's good to see that the kids have the intelligence to potentially pick up on this. It helps to sell the idea that the kids could stand a chance in their battle to escape the farm.

Part II: Changed Scenes

While some scenes have been cut, other scenes have been changed. Change inevitable in any adaptation but I feel that some of these changes are really distracting and make the show worse than it should be.

Sister Krone
Sister Krone isn't someone who has been changed between manga and anime, it's more like her character has been assassinated. Here's the changes:
- She doesn't sing in the manga, and she certainly doesn't sing loudly
- She doesn't talk to or coddle a toy baby, that scene is pulled out of thin air for the anime.
- She doesn't discuss her plan out lout loud like an idiot
- As a result of the above, she doesn't come across as a jolly, deranged figure of fun. She's calculating, observant and ruthless with schemes of her own - just in a different way to Mon.

I really don't understand how this:

plotjpkv6.png

sisterkronemangasrjmd.png


Was changed to this:

sisterkrome15njhl.jpg

sistersister5ak31.jpg


The anime version of Sister Krone is peculiar, manic character that really doesn't mesh with the tone that the series had established up to that point. She doesn't feel nearly as serious or threatening as the cold and calculating character in the manga.

Internal Dialogue

The manga for Promised Neverland frequently makes uses of internal dialogue. I understand why the anime has removed it: what works in one medium doesn't work in another. Internal dialogue is common in books and comics, not in films and TV. This does, however create two problems. Firstly, we miss information that helps to develop our characters, especially those who don't have anyone to speak to (Krone, Mom.) Secondly, when the show realizes certain information is vital to the plot, the way those ideas are communicated leaves a lot to be desired.

Part A: Characterization
There's too many examples of the first kind to list them all, but as an example consider the below scene:

momavejvh.png


I love how Mom wasn't just observing Emma visually, but also subtly checking her pulse. This suggests that she's calculating and observant on a whole other level and really elevates how dangerous she is.

I'm not saying that every scene from the manga should be in the anime. Nor am I saying that you should constantly hear the thoughts of characters while watching an anime. I just want to highlight that something is lost when translating one medium to another. Now, in a well made adaptation you'll see tricks used to convert the internal dialogue into something more palpable for the medium of anime. For example, you might convert the essence of the dialogue into an actual conversation between two characters, so that the audience can learn the same thing.

The above scene with Mom is somewhat trickier, but there are still ways to convey the idea using tools only found in anime. For example, when Mom is touching Emma's neck, we could have a quick cut to a close-up of Mom's fingers and we could hear Emma's heartbeat, hopefully communicating to the audience that Mom was checking for an elevated pulse. Or we could use more abstract and unusual camera angles, colours, sound effects, musical choices to communicate similar ideas. There's a real plethora of options, but I don't feel like the anime is using any of them. It feels like it's using the visuals of the manga as a base and not doing a whole lot with them.

Part B: Questionable Choices
Sometimes these manga scenes/lines are converted into the anime because its vital that the audience understands the information that was previously internal dialogue. Unfortunately whenever these lines were converted for episode 3 they chose to have the characters speak (or sing out loud) information that would get the characters killed if anyone else heard them. It just doesn't make any sense or fit the tone or logic of the series:

sisterkromeqjjqj.jpg


She's right next to the kid's rooms, they can definitely hear this!

loudtalk2ffkop.jpg

loudtalk4uoj53.jpg


Watch out Emma, glasses girl is literally right next to you! What are you saying? Not only are these scenes ridiculous on their face, but they're completely avoidable. Why can't characters whisper, or heck, just have them think these thoughts to themselves. It would be far less silly and certainly less distracting.

Part III: Conclusions and Staying Positive

Different mediums have different strengths and weaknesses. It's inevitable and important that a work will change when it's adapted from one medium to another. A skilled production team will draw upon the key elements of the source material: story, tone, characters, theme etc - and find a creative way to translate these to anime. It's even possible for elements to change radically from one to the other - and that's fine too, as long as the resulting work is still good.

In the case of Promised Neverland, many of the changes that I've examined only diminish the quality of the series. Some are just plain bad (the timeline, characters speaking their secrets thoughts out loud), others are creative choices that don't mesh with the tone of the story (Sister Krone) while others failure to communicate key ideas about the characters. None of it works. With the creative staff making decisions this bad so early on, I'm pretty concerned about where the rest of the season is going.

I don't want to leave on a purely negative note, so I've decided to throw out some recommendations for other works which share some similarities to the ideas/tone/genre of Promised Neverland, but which I consider to be much better:

Thrillers:
Monster - This 74 (!) episode long mystery/thriller is an all time classic and one of my favourite shows of all time. The production quality is excellent for a work of this length and the series maintains a haunting, tense tone throughout.
Death Note - This work is certainly 'edgier' and more over the top than Promised Neverland but it's still an extremely entertaining series. It's focus is squarely on the mind games between the two main characters with far less of a focus on mystery.
Kaiji - This is another work which focuses on mind games but its setting and tone is far more grounded than either Promised Neverland or Death Note.
Hannibal (TV Series) - Definitely not an anime, but I'd be in dereliction of duty if I didn't recommend people watched one of the most impressive, engaging and mesmerizing thrillers in any medium.

Prison Break Stories:
Prison Break - Even though this show went downhill far before they stopped making it, I still consider the first two seasons to be exciting, creative and relentlessly tense. You just have to pretend that series stopped at the end of the second season.
Great write up!

I decided to read the manga (haven't started yet) because of what was recommended and your write up makes me think that was the right choice. Also thanks for the recommendations, I have watched all of them (apart from Kaiji and Hannibal which I am planning to watch in the future) and I liked them all.
 

jman2050

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Oct 25, 2017
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Dragon Ball Super: Broly

It's like they looked at the Bardock special and both Broly movies (what do you mean there were 3? You're surely mistaken, only 2 Broly movies exist) and said "this is stupid" and decided to fix everything wrong with them. And also drop a dump truck of money on the screen too while they were at it.

What I'm saying is that this is a must-watch for anyone who's even a passive fan of Dragon Ball.
 
Oct 25, 2017
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Promised Neverland should have gone to the folks that handled Godoka magica. Then it would have been a solid anime.

Seems people enjoying tpn are only enjoying based on manga experience.

The OP is still the best part.
 
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As a manga reader I think that the Promised Neverland anime is good so far but I don't think it will ever go beyond that. As many have already said before some of the things they've cut out and the lack of inter monologue has hurt the anime. If anything this adaptation will be like I how ended up feeling about Parasytes. Not bad by an means but because of things being cut and scenes being changed around it was only ever good. A part of me wishes I hadn't read the manga prior as I'd feel like I'd be able to enjoy the anime a lot more. Not to say I don't enjoy the anime but I can't help but compare it to the manga constantly. Even though it could be a lot better I thank god it didn't turn out like Tokyo Ghoul or Black Clover because those are some rancid adaptations.
 

Temperance

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Oct 25, 2017
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[NO 2FA]
Mob Psycho S2E4 - That was an awesome episode, the brutality of it really hit home by the end. Reigen keeps bringing up how Mob had changed, hoping their relationship evolves further this season. I was actually shook with the last few minutes if this, ONE sure knows how to write engaging stories.
 

Jintor

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Oct 25, 2017
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Hi-Score Girl 10

Hidaka is a..... SMART girl but it's stil really hard to say if her plan will work out. This triangle reminds me of SNAFU S2's with the lead characters Hikigaya(Yaguchi), Yukinoshita(Ono) and Yuigahama(Hidaka). Hidaka isn't making Yuigahama's mistake here, she intends to play the long game. I like what's happened to Yaguchi post-exam. It makes a lot of sense and paves way for a lot of possibilities.

My read is that Hidaka doesn't expect her plan to work out at all. She feels what she feels and she can't not feel what she feels, but she doesn't have any real expectations whatsoever of success or of drawing Haruo away at all.
 

Sterok

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Oct 25, 2017
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PriPara 35

Gotta admit, I didn't expect to see accidental suicide in a happy go lucky idol show like this.
 
Oct 25, 2017
22,309
Run With The Wind 15

Excellent lead up to the start of the race, nice seeing Kakeru remain level headed and take note of his teammates feelings. Yuuki plot seemed to have gone nowhere (unless the folks it keeps randomly flashing to in the crowd are his parents).

Haiji probably will jump and make it over the dude that fell, icing his leg post race probs.
 

Virix

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Oct 27, 2017
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Started Hinamatsuri for now. Hasn't been as consistently funny as Mitsuboshi Colors or Hisomaso but I do like the way they're tackling the class divide in modern Japan with an ensemble cast. This thing also has a lot more animation firepower than I anticipated which is always a plus.
Great, you won't regret it!
 

Sterok

Member
Oct 25, 2017
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PriPara 38

Honestly the whole finale was kind of underwhelming. The Falulu stuff was fine, but there was almost no drama about the whole thing when the show hasn't shied away from acting serious before. And Falulu and Unicorn leaving seems pointless when the entire reason Unicorn was leaving was to get away from Falulu because she was a terrible manager (which she was). Odd cliffhanger to end on. Overall, an okay idol show with some decent characters (Mirei, Shion, Leona), but a step down from its predecessor in every way. Especially the performances and special moves. Just not as flashy or cool. Can't say I'm that pumped for more of this, but hopefully it can improve.
 

Boxy Brown

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Oct 27, 2017
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Dragon Ball Super: Broly

It's like they looked at the Bardock special and both Broly movies (what do you mean there were 3? You're surely mistaken, only 2 Broly movies exist) and said "this is stupid" and decided to fix everything wrong with them. And also drop a dump truck of money on the screen too while they were at it.

What I'm saying is that this is a must-watch for anyone who's even a passive fan of Dragon Ball.
Wait, what was wrong with Bardock special?!

I know there are some flaws but I still love it :(
 

jman2050

Avenger
Oct 25, 2017
5,787
It's just me being cheeky, I think Father of Goku is fine for what it is, but certainly not without its own stupid nonsense. In the end I certainly like this retelling of that specific story more.
 
Oct 25, 2017
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Yeah the part of Broly thats just an adaptation of Dragon Ball Minus is still the best Bardock content. Still don't like him though, and that's only 70% from him being top tier in DBFZ
 

Segafreak

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Oct 27, 2017
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Just about finishing Gundam Iron Blooded Orphans first season and I haven't seen anyone make the connection but I noticed after the episode in which the strikers were massacred, the Gjallarhorn organization is actually based on the real life Pinkerton agency.

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Pinkerton_(detective_agency)

Also Gundam IBO is a nice surprise after the disappointing Unicorn OVA I watched on netflix. Whats up with Gundam/mecha shows and whiny protagonists.
 

KCS

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Oct 27, 2017
1,438
PriPara 38

Honestly the whole finale was kind of underwhelming. The Falulu stuff was fine, but there was almost no drama about the whole thing when the show hasn't shied away from acting serious before. And Falulu and Unicorn leaving seems pointless when the entire reason Unicorn was leaving was to get away from Falulu because she was a terrible manager (which she was). Odd cliffhanger to end on. Overall, an okay idol show with some decent characters (Mirei, Shion, Leona), but a step down from its predecessor in every way. Especially the performances and special moves. Just not as flashy or cool. Can't say I'm that pumped for more of this, but hopefully it can improve.

This is about as good as Pripara gets so prepare yourself.
 

blurr

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Oct 26, 2017
793
Just about finishing Gundam Iron Blooded Orphans first season and I haven't seen anyone make the connection but I noticed after the episode in which the strikers were massacred, the Gjallarhorn organization is actually based on the real life Pinkerton agency.

https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Pinkerton_(detective_agency)

Also Gundam IBO is a nice surprise after the disappointing Unicorn OVA I watched on netflix. Whats up with Gundam/mecha shows and whiny protagonists.
IBO comrade!
I appreciated how the ending didn't feel the need to explicitly spell out what had happened, but just highlighted Oono's test number, extra-highlighted Yaguchi's test number (including the reference to Capcom's 1942), and slowly panned over the list of numbers of accepted students, leaving us to draw the obvious conclusion. It's straightforward storytelling, but it still has a level of faith that the audience can put two and two together that TV can easily not have. And of course, the ED song playing over the whole thing gave the sequence added impact.
Yeah, it was crushing to see his number missing, I quickly started playing the next episode to confirm my suspicion, wondering if the numbers were actually something else entirely and the show pulled the rug from under us.

On a slightly unrelated note, I would like to point out another instance of this that I feel worked elegantly driving a deeper message in Maquia. When Ariel's child is born, she holds Maquia's finger just like Ariel did, drawing a parallel with the scene in the beginning where she feels she was destined to take care of Ariel. Now she realizes that it was her own choice. Unfortunately the scene also follows a flashback making this explicit but I loved the moment.

My read is that Hidaka doesn't expect her plan to work out at all. She feels what she feels and she can't not feel what she feels, but she doesn't have any real expectations whatsoever of success or of drawing Haruo away at all.
That's a very cool way of looking at it but I can't say I feel the same. Not entirely at least.
 
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NSESN

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Oct 25, 2017
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I don't remember much of the deen's adaptation of fate route but I remember that I hated saber and shiro relationship.
 
Oct 25, 2017
22,309
Hopefully shiro will finally take shinji up on his offer and team up with him. Fate needs to write him in such a way that doesnt leave us fans having to feel morally conflicted over loving him.
 

MikeHattsu

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Oct 25, 2017
8,916
Well, I've posted stuff on my blog again...

I visited some locations seen in Clannad After Story:
https://mikehattsu.blogspot.com/2019/01/clannad-after-story-wedding-proposal.html
https://mikehattsu.blogspot.com/2019/01/clannad-after-story-tomoyas-apartment.html
https://mikehattsu.blogspot.com/2019/01/clannad-after-story-apartment-walk.html
https://mikehattsu.blogspot.com/2019/01/clannad-after-story-side-road.html
https://mikehattsu.blogspot.com/2019/01/clannad-after-story-riverside.html

The last Clannad After Story place was also seen in K-On:
https://mikehattsu.blogspot.com/2019/01/k-on-another-op-location.html

I went back to Uji, just becuse... And also went back to the Nagoya Congress Center seen in Sound! Euphonium :P
https://mikehattsu.blogspot.com/2019/01/sound-euphonium-another-uji-revisit.html
https://mikehattsu.blogspot.com/2019/01/sound-euphonium-nagoya-center-outside.html
https://mikehattsu.blogspot.com/2019/01/sound-euphonium-nagoya-center-inside.html

In Nagoya there were also Love Live Sunshine locations:
https://mikehattsu.blogspot.com/2019/01/love-live-sunshine-nagoya-station.html
https://mikehattsu.blogspot.com/2019/01/love-live-sunshine-central-park.html
https://mikehattsu.blogspot.com/2019/01/love-live-sunshine-nippon-gaishi-hall.html

Kaiyodo Figure Museum was somewhat related to anime?
https://mikehattsu.blogspot.com/2019/01/kaiyodo-figure-museum.html

Also went to another A Silent Voice location:
https://mikehattsu.blogspot.com/2019/01/a-silent-voice-gifu-station.html


More A Silent Voice and Love Live Sunshine later...
 

blurr

Member
Oct 26, 2017
793
Hi-Score Girl 11-12 END

I'm equal parts angry and glad there's no episode 13.

50/50

Not one percent more or less than that.

This was just too much for me. Hidaka isn't playing around anymore, she wants to end this knowing he's made up with Akira so she is taking the fastest route. Yaguchi can't really turn down the offer, given he was adamant about fighting with her again, it only displays a lack of resolve. Ono Akira's predicament is really sad and it's pretty clear he wants to be with her so there's no way he can afford to lose. Unless Hidaka somehow finds out about Ono's predicament(and I kind of hope the story doesn't chicken out with that route even if I have to suffer any consequence), I don't see her backing down at all.

FUCK I'm gonna need some time to recover from this.

This almost made me forget the fact that they finally showed the PS1 I was waiting for since the beginning of the show.
 

FluxWaveZ

Persona Central
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Oct 25, 2017
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The Rising of the Shield Hero - Episode 04

Am I really supposed to believe this is a matriarchy? When they established that in the first episode, it was interesting because it's not a concept I've seen at the forefront of an anime. But, really, it seems it was just a way to explain the reactions towards the Shield Hero and why they wouldn't believe him at all with the sexual assault claims (and that wasn't even particularly because of "matriarchy", but because that's how the king twisted things). Other than that, nothing about this has seemed like a matriarchal society at all (and even the opposite, in some cases).

Episode was fine, but I'm getting kinda bored. Maybe now that the first conflict in the form of the wave is over, and the protagonist's angst has subsided with his ally, there'll be some interesting story beats to follow.
[Promised Neverland: Anime vs Manga]
It is interesting. I'm not sure I'd enjoy Promised Neverland as much as I do if my only exposure was just the anime. I'm usually someone who prefers anime to manga, but it does seem that this adaptation is unfortunately lacking.
 

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Now that I have re-read TPN, I need to say that the anime, while good, it's far from what I wanted.

I knew Cloverworks wasn't up to the task.
 
Oct 28, 2017
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The Rising of the Shield Hero - Episode 04

Am I really supposed to believe this is a matriarchy? When they established that in the first episode, it was interesting because it's not a concept I've seen at the forefront of an anime. But, really, it seems it was just a way to explain the reactions towards the Shield Hero and why they wouldn't believe him at all with the sexual assault claims (and that wasn't even particularly because of "matriarchy", but because that's how the king twisted things). Other than that, nothing about this has seemed like a matriarchal society at all (and even the opposite, in some cases).
later on the queen get introduced and come back to the kingdom, she was away for political travels. the king is just a piece holder and gets punished for his abuse of power
 

E_i

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Oct 27, 2017
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Wataten! episode 4

Is this a series about a lolicon, or about three little girls terrorizing a young woman? Or is it both?
 

Yonafunu

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Oct 26, 2017
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[Promised Neverland: Anime vs Manga]
Part A: Characterization
There's too many examples of the first kind to list them all, but as an example consider the below scene:

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The above scene with Mom is somewhat trickier, but there are still ways to convey the idea using tools only found in anime. For example, when Mom is touching Emma's neck, we could have a quick cut to a close-up of Mom's fingers and we could hear Emma's heartbeat, hopefully communicating to the audience that Mom was checking for an elevated pulse. Or we could use more abstract and unusual camera angles, colours, sound effects, musical choices to communicate similar ideas. There's a real plethora of options, but I don't feel like the anime is using any of them. It feels like it's using the visuals of the manga as a base and not doing a whole lot with them.

Great post, and I agree with most of what you're saying. I wanted to wait a bit before writing about the changes, but you've already said a lot of it.

That said, I wanted to comment on this part specifically. There actually is a close-up in the scene, but it was used instead to foreshadow the tracking device in Emma's ear.

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I guess that shows a commitment to the pace of the anime specifically, at least.
 

Steroyd

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Oct 27, 2017
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Shield Hero 04

Hold up!

They age with their level?

That only makes me ask how old Raphtellia's parents ar- I should not be going down that rabbit hole.

Interesting bit with the King, why is he so hell bent on propping up the spear and putting down shield.

Wataten! episode 4

Is this a series about a lolicon, or about three little girls terrorizing a young woman? Or is it both?

I only see one terrorist in this show and it's Hinata's psychological warfare on her older sister, planting the seeds of discord at her school.
 
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