I will wait to see ok the quality of the story, could be good.
The villain speech falls quite flat though when I so far have no emotional attachment to the pilot or context for how this villain is possibly a threat in any way to Master Chief considering the piles and piles of bodies he's left in his wake.
The villain speech falls quite flat though when I so far have no emotional attachment to the pilot or context for how this villain is possibly a threat in any way to Master Chief considering the piles and piles of bodies he's left in his wake.