you might want to check your math.Seeing some people fall behind and I just want to say you can do this! All you need is one good weekend of writing and you'll be fine! And lucky for you we've got two weekends of writing left!!
edit: oh also im at 33482 words
I haven't started yet, but I'm already considering changing the POV of the story to the mentor because theSince a lot of us are a good way through our novels, curious if people are having any revelations? I'm realizing how easy it is in a sequel to just unelegantly regurgitate old information from the previous book
revelation... nah... I knew this but past me sucks at keeping notes.Since a lot of us are a good way through our novels, curious if people are having any revelations? I'm realizing how easy it is in a sequel to just unelegantly regurgitate old information from the previous book
A smaller starting cast being more manageable compared to the original version of the story I wrote was something I already anticipated, so not really a revelation. Just how much better I was able to make it read through reincorporating content/subject matter into dialogue rather than just excising all of the old rambling prose that so much of it was confined to was a pleasant surprise, though.Since a lot of us are a good way through our novels, curious if people are having any revelations? I'm realizing how easy it is in a sequel to just unelegantly regurgitate old information from the previous book
Since a lot of us are a good way through our novels, curious if people are having any revelations? I'm realizing how easy it is in a sequel to just unelegantly regurgitate old information from the previous book
A smaller starting cast being more manageable compared to the original version of the story I wrote was something I already anticipated, so not really a revelation. Just how much better I was able to make it read through reincorporating content/subject matter into dialogue rather than just excising all of the old rambling prose that so much of it was confined to was a pleasant surprise, though.
Aside from the fact that my writing's actually devolved in the four years I've been doing this, I think having a set goal is actually detrimental to my stories' momentum and causing me to write them like they're serials instead of novels with a beginning, middle and end. Like my story this year has basically transformed into a series of vignettes of my characters hanging out instead of this meta-commentary on superheroes and where they should stand between order and justice like I thought it would be. A couple of days ago, I actually went back and deleted a passage where half of my cast caught the sixth member doing some 5E cleric shit because I thought it'd be too soon for something like that to go down. Two thirds of the way through the month.
That said, I'm not as down on it as I was my last project, where you can just feel me dying as I posted updates. As shittily as it's written, I believe I can actually break through to the third act if I throw any semblance of pacing out the window. I might actually want to go back and finish it once the new year rolls around, so that's already a major improvement over last year.
this is quite generous of you :)HEY NANOERS <3 You are all awesome \o/
Keep up making words appear <3 !!!
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Also since I'm not doing NaNo this year, but still wanna help out you all who are in it, if you want a free sketch of a character off your NaNo, pelt me with a char description and I'll try to draw some :)
I have realized that it is really, really easy for me to get lost in aimless meandering. Particularly conversations. My characters can just chat and chat and avoid action. Which makes it easy to reach quotas, but makes it hard to reach story goals. In the future, I'll want to actually try planning out a story and determine roughly how many words I want to spend on each section.Since a lot of us are a good way through our novels, curious if people are having any revelations? I'm realizing how easy it is in a sequel to just unelegantly regurgitate old information from the previous book
Wow that's really awesome. Thank you for offering this to us! I got a character description for you if you don't mind.HEY NANOERS <3 You are all awesome \o/
Keep up making words appear <3 !!!
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Also since I'm not doing NaNo this year, but still wanna help out you all who are in it, if you want a free sketch of a character off your NaNo, pelt me with a char description and I'll try to draw some :)
Yeah, this is my problem as well.I have realized that it is really, really easy for me to get lost in aimless meandering. Particularly conversations. My characters can just chat and chat and avoid action. Which makes it easy to reach quotas, but makes it hard to reach story goals. In the future, I'll want to actually try planning out a story and determine roughly how many words I want to spend on each section.
WC: 62863
My biggest single day total so far this year, despite working a full day, cooking and watching three hours of wrestling. No idea how I managed that.
As far as revelations? It's lots of little things for me. This story, my character wakes up in a life that's alien to her, so I filled it with other characters and mundanity she has to navigate as she tries to figure out her identity. A husband. Two step kids. An ex wife still on the scene. Work colleagues. Etc. That stuff was just texture as she got through her first day.
But as the novel continues and gets into the plot, of who she really is, and why she has no memories (and as it ties in to related themes... which I think a lot about before I start usually), I found myself getting drawn back to those characters. Their mundane lives seem exotic to my main, as the short part of her life she can remember is anything but.
Turns out I write six year olds really well. Turns out the teenage step daughter is already involved with the boy next door, that I thought she was just doting on. The young woman who runs the company my main works for is more conservative than she wants to admit to herself, and struggles with the modern Valve-esque office environment she thinks someone like her is expected to make. The ex-wife turned out to be a deputy sheriff which I didn't have in my brief outline *at all*.
I've never taken an idea from conception to a finished draft in less than a year before. Speaking drafts, my first novel was based on a short story I'd written a year or more before. My second was an adaptation of a film script I'd written (and done nothing with... I had ambitions of following that route, but realized I just loved writing and film scripts are soooo limiting). My third took me years to wrangle and almost stopped me writing (2003 to 2010. YIKES). My fourth, was based on a short story idea I'd had in 2010 that I expanded into my first NaNo in 2016. My fifth in 2017 was again further based on that short story that my original novel was based on (it's a stories are wheels affair with the same players, but it's a complete different narrative to what came before).
This, fingers crossed sixth finished 1st draft, is an idea I came up with in Spring.
Next year, I'm already planning to revisit my other big failure. A story I got over 100,000 words into starting in 2010 and writing into 2011 before I abandoned it (and again, didn't write for like five years). It remains the absolute best concept I've come up with. Probably the best I ever will. Hopefully 40 year old plagiarize (OH GOD I TURN 40 NEXT YEAR) can do what 30 year old plag couldn't.
I have realized that it is really, really easy for me to get lost in aimless meandering. Particularly conversations. My characters can just chat and chat and avoid action. Which makes it easy to reach quotas, but makes it hard to reach story goals. In the future, I'll want to actually try planning out a story and determine roughly how many words I want to spend on each section.
HEY NANOERS <3 You are all awesome \o/
Keep up making words appear <3 !!!
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Also since I'm not doing NaNo this year, but still wanna help out you all who are in it, if you want a free sketch of a character off your NaNo, pelt me with a char description and I'll try to draw some :)
No, my characters are usually discussing plot-relevant topics, but they go into too much detail or get pedantic about minor points that don't help move the plot along. I think my next project will be one in which dialogue is summarized rather than written out. I've done that style before and it's still one of my favorite things I've written.How are you two getting lost? Are they just chatting about unimportant things like the weather?
They need to be misunderstood by adults, but understandable internally. I find it helps to remember stuff you cared about as a child that you don't really dwell on any more, and make that centrally important to them. Also, kids go from 0 to 100 emotionally really quickly, even if they don't want to.I think the skill of coming to your ideas sooner rather than later is an important one that is very difficult to learn. Anyways glad you're having fun. Discovering that characters are more important than you drafted them to be is always a great turn of events. I don't think I could write children well at all. Any tips?
Honestly, plot-related stuff or what I think is counts as it, like my character's backgrounds and hobbies. I'm doing a lot of telling instead of showing, but that's what you get when you decide at the very last second to participate this year.How are you two getting lost? Are they just chatting about unimportant things like the weather?
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zulux21 said:
In regards to the works that inspired what I'm writing, which aren't books so much as games with dialogue and worldbuilding so extensive that they may as well be, I had first thought to emulate what the most recent arc among them did in respect to cast size without realizing that they didn't really make such thinly spread focus pan out either (as much as I still liked those games and said cast). Going back to a preceding arc in the same series, which took place roughly concurrently with the first two games of that later arc but in a different part of the continent, its main cast started out much smaller and it benefited greatly from it, so I figured they were onto something.The smaller starting cast is an interesting detail I've never really thought about before tbh