You're killing Smough first but maybe try to lead Ornstein away from him to separate them since Smough is slower. Then run back to Smough to do damage, Ornstein catches up, lead him away again.
Assuming your Claymore is +10, which is certainly enough for this fight, but you could always take a break and head back to Firelink Shrine:
- Buy some fire resin from the female Undead Merchant (unless you have a spell weapon buff any way)
- Tackle the Catacombs (boss gives useful item)
- Tackle New Londo Ruins (useful item down there, but you have to kill an NPC to get it and explore this area fully before O&S)
All that would help you deal more damage to O&S and have more heals for the fight as well as give you a breather. Anor Londo seems like a long way from Firelink, but Sen's is really just a lift ride or drop down, no enemies to encounter. Just make sure you've opened the big doors in the Anor Londo main hall to avoid the archers again!
Yeah, I don't think my damage output is the issue at all.
I have thought about going back down from Anor Londo a few times, but haven't because I'm always thinking I'm just one good try away from beating O&S and even if I am doing a blind-ish playthrough I've picked up the info from somewhere that I'm pretty close to
being able to teleport