I think the overall story is good, interesting and pretty unique. But the storytelling definitely varies from charming (I remember really enjoying the scenes with Heartman) to terrible and cringeworthy (dialogue, unnecessary booty shots, tons of exposition in cutscenes).I enjoyed death stranding for what it was, but the story was either really, really bad or really, really good, sometimes in the same scene. I guess the same could be said of the gameplay. However, I loved the online parts of the game, and I was addicted to building roads and bridges for other people.
I'd definitely play a sequel, and I think a few tweaks could be made to the formula to smooth over the rough edges.
I would love for someone else than Kojima to actually write the English dialogue, because he really isn't good at it. Feels like Anime writing with real people, which just doesn't jive imo-
He is an expert at creating original ideas, worlds + cool imagery and cinematography. Someone else should take care of the rest.