the reread yesterday through official channels was so much better. easier to understand and visually much easier to see what was going on. here's hoping when they do adapt this into an anime it's well well well into the story. it's a pipe dream i know
Its....
Got too much going on in the first chapter. Too much terminology. The art isn't clear on whats even happening. A manga shouldn't need to be colorized to explain whats going on. I'm so lost. World building in a manga should be slow and gradual. C'mon, Kishimoto.
Really? I think it started to get confusing at the endpoint of Shippuden.First chapter was beautiful.
some panels were confussing... it's always been like that with Kishimoto, even from the very beginning of Naruto.
Free on Manga Plus so that's great ! I'm still unsure how this amazing app is legit and available in my country hah.
Few thoughts :
- I think for a first timer, the art is actually really good.
It can ( and will ) be improved over time but that's not a bad start. He does a good job at emulating kishimoto too.
- The story doesnt explain its concepts in compelling ways.
It seems a bit bland and generic at the moment.
I still have no idea what is the quest the hero is on. Getting... keys ?
So basically I feel the opposite of what I expected. I didnt think the art would be this solid ( despite some issues ) and i thought the story and world would be a lot more interesting...
I'll check out a few more chapters though.
I still have no idea what is the quest the hero is on. Getting... keys ?
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I don't know if that's a concern. Like.. Did Persona 5 have any consequences?What the fuck? Commit suppuku and become a samurai? I hope the kids reading this won't be stupid. What was Shueisha editorial thinking? Neat concept though even tough a bit much convoluted.
Seems to be weekly, the website in OP says 19th is when the next chapter will be online.Liked it, looking forward to more!
Is this weekly, bi weekly, monthly?
You mean Persona 3 lol, all P5 has is ripping a mask off.I don't know if that's a concern. Like.. Did Persona 5 have any consequences?
I get that worry as a gut reaction, just not sure if it's rational
Look, P3, P5, it's all the same to me.
I assume Kishimoto designed the characters, and will still be doing so in the future( in collaboration with Okubo). He does the original storyboarding of this as well so he does more than just write. Okubo does the final illustration.PS: I know he's in charge of the writing, but I'm curious: is he also a designer? I imagine he'd like to design a few if not most of the important characters, like Hachimoto and all of that.
Makes sense! I was actually wondering about him maybe storyboarding it.I assume Kishimoto designed the characters, and will still be doing so in the future( in collaboration with Okubo). He does the original storyboarding of this as well so he does more than just write. Okubo does the final illustration.
2nd chapter is better, albeit a little contrived haha
It's weekly
Kishimoto is doing the writing, storyboards, and many of the designs. So Okubo is doing the final art. And then add in however many assistants they have, and it shouldn't be too bad (though of course it's still that weekly grind).Oh really? I could have sworn it was monthly. That's pretty surprising. Considering how dense the art is, I wonder if they can keep that up weekly.
Does he deliver pizza?
Crossing my fingers Kishi doesnt go in a bad direction with NamelessI liked the second chapter a lot more. I'm a bit nervous about what's going on with the gender of this new character though. Manga doesn't really have the best track record at handling stuff like that.
How do you feel about My Hero...But there's a lot of manga out there, just not 12-year old wish fulfillment.
And this was particularly blatant and bad. I mean, most media usually has some cavet or message about wish fulfillment, such as hard-work, etc. Naruto was like that, for example. This is the most blatant, poorly written, fulfillment fantasy I've ever seen. Reading this made me feel embarrassed and dirty.
I haven't really read much of it, but what I have read isn't as blatant badly written. It's not good writing, but there's differing levels of bad quality.